ON HOLIDAY

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At that time, my entire extended family and I went to my older brother's house in Blitar, we took a small bus, after arriving there my family and I enjoyed the food provided.

And when afternoon arrived, my family and I decided to go to Chocolate Village, when we got there we were very happy, there were lots of various kinds of food and drinks, there were also rides that could be used by small children and adults.

We had fun enjoying the food and rides there and finally the evening call to prayer arrived, we decided to pray the evening prayer first, then continue our journey home.

During the trip we decided to stop at one of the malls to buy various snacks and clothes, and after finishing we decided to go home and arrived home at 21.30 at night.

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At that time, my entire extended family and I traveled by small bus to my older brother's home in Blitar, where we loved the meal that was served.

When afternoon came, my family and I made the decision to visit Chocolate Village. When we got there, we were thrilled to find a wide variety of food and drinks, as well as rides suitable for both adults and little children.

When the evening call to prayer finally came, we chose to pray the evening prayer first before continuing our journey home. We had a great day there and enjoyed the food and rides.

We made the decision to stop at one of the malls along the way to purchase a variety of snacks and after finishing, we decided to head home, and we did so around 21.30 p.m.

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At that time, my entire extended family and I went to my older brother's house in Blitar. We took a small bus, and after arriving there, my family and I enjoyed the food provided.

And when afternoon arrived, my family and I decided to go to Chocolate Village. When we got there, we were very happy. There were lots of various kinds of food and drinks, and there were also rides that could be used by small children and adults.

We had fun enjoying the food and rides there, and finally the evening call to prayer arrived. We decided to pray the evening prayer first, then continue our journey home.

During the trip, we decided to stop at one of the malls to buy various snacks and clothes, and after finishing, we decided to go home and arrived home at 21.30 at night.


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